Yeah I'm Smoooooth

Here is the critique that you requested.

The focus of the piece seems to be well done but the contrast seems just a tad heavy but it well enough to distinguish the details. The pose and expression of the model is interesting, very playful, and full of personality. I do feel that the large amount of blinding white negative space distracts a bit from the main subject but the intensity does make the model pop. The one thing that I find odd is the hat thingy that is on his head, I have no idea what the heck that thing is.